Pretend you have a crystal ball that allows you to see the ending of your story. What do you see happening? What is the outcome of the various conflicts in the story? What do you think happens to the characters when all is said and done? Even if you have finished the story, what do you think happens next for the people and places in your book?
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If I had a crystal ball that allows me to see the endind of the book that I am reading would be that I think Jolly is going to go back to school and LaVaughn is going to keep babysiiting without getting paid because she really cares about the kids. Some of the problems that are in this book would be that Jolly just got fired from her job and she hardly has any money to pay for anything so I think Jolly is going to get her act together and she's going to go back to school and get her Highschool diploma
ReplyDeleteAt the end of my book, The Misfits by James Howe, I picture Bobby (fat kid) hooking up with Kelsey, Addie hooking up with Skeezie, and Joe just being Joe. Plus, I figure DuShawn will lose the election, as will everyone on the Freedom Party ticket. They're all not popular, and from past electoral experiences, only popular kids win. In addition to being losers, what they stand for (minority rights) is sooooooo stupid. There are only 3 black kids in the entire 7th grade, and they're not descriminated against! Soooo the Freedom Party will fail miserably!!
ReplyDeleteI think the way this book will end, is they will reveal who they really are. This book is similar to a book I have recently read, "The Brox Masquarade" They are being everyone but themselves.
ReplyDeleteThe book im reading is "Make Lemonade" by Virginia Euwer Wolff.In the book i see that Jolly is going through a tough time and she has lost her job and she now cant pay LaVaughn. In the book I think that we ill learn more about LaVaughn's dad and how he died.later i think Jolly will soon find another job. I also think that Jolly will soon pay LaVaughn. Then later on in the story i belive when everything is good....the lemon seed will grow.
ReplyDeleteIn my book crash i think that crash and penn are going to become best friends because i thuink that mike is going to do something and go overboard with the whole bullying thing and it is going to mess up the realtionship between carsh and mike so crash is going to feel bad about all the things he did and then try to stop mike from doing it too but i dont think mike will listen. I think mike will just blow crash off and pick on both penn and crash
ReplyDeleteJessica, I feel that all those things could happen at the end of your book. There are only 3 black kids in the entire 7th grade? That's got to suck but since they are not descriminated against then I guess that they are fine at that school.
ReplyDeleteIn my book, The Outsiders, it is very unpredictable. Right when you think someone is about to die... they dont! ANd then they runn away to some random old church??? But it will be very hard to predict what will happen. I think that Soda will die and ponyboy will get revenge on whoever killed him. And then there will be an all out gang war...lot's of people will die.
ReplyDeleteJessica i can see what your thinking it is going to turn opposites at the end like penn and crash are going to be friends instead of mike and crash
ReplyDeleteI think that my book "Crash" will end happily. I feel that Crash and Mike are going to take a joke to far on Penn and Crash and Mike will get in trouble. Then Penn will forgive Crash because Penn is a nice person and they will become friends.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a crystal ball that allowed me to see into the future of my book "Crash" I could predict that in the end of the book Webb is going to be one of the coolest kids in their grade, and Crash and Mike are going to wish that they never made fun of him. Also I think that there is going to be a big football game and Crash is going to do really good and get to go out with Jane and Crash will end up hanging out with Jane more than Mike.
ReplyDeleteIn my book the Misfits, I think that since the more important characters are mostly nerds they will start to become more popular in a way. Like they will not become so popular to where they will "run the school" they will just be more liked and taken more seriously.
ReplyDeleteMY book, "Make Lemonade" by Virginia Euwer Wolff. If I were to look into a crystal ball, I would see great things happening for all of the characters in my book! I think Jolly will go back to school, finish her education, and get a good paying job to support her two children, Jilly and Jeremy. Lavaughn. I see Lavaughn finishing her school year with great grades and she will continue to babysit Jollys kids. Although she may continue to help out Jolly, I dont think she will be paid back for all of the times Jolly didnt give her money for babysitting. For Lavaughns mother, I think she will find another man and live a happy life with her daughter. I also think that Lavaughns mother will begin to treat Jolly as her own child and allow her to move in with her and Lavaughn. I have a feeling the term "Make Lemonade" has a HUGE twist to it but i cannot quite see its future and meaning through the crystal ball.
ReplyDeleteI'm reading the same book and I agree to the ending of the story and I also agree that LaVaughn is going to learn more about her Dad...
ReplyDeleteWow Jessica haha. I guess your book won't have a happy ending.:) But in my book, I think the main characters are just going to die so mine isn't exactly one happy story either.
ReplyDeleteCourtney i can somewhat agree with you because my characters will just change alot i think like the characters crash and the nerdy penn will be crash's best friend and mike will show his jealousy and pick on both of them instead of just penn
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alicia about Jolly going back to school because i think that Jolly is going to realize that she's not going to be able to provide for Jilly and Jeremy without having a job. SO for Jolly to be able to get a job she is going to have to go back to school and get her diploma because right now Jolly can't even spell words right. I don't agree that Lavaughn will continue babysitting for Jolly. I think she will continue to visit the kids because she likes them but i do not think that she wil abbysit. Even though we can tell that Lavaughn has a interest in the kids she will not babysit for no money because she knows what she wants and that is money so she can go to college. So that is one thing that i do not agree with Alicia on
ReplyDeleteAt the end of my book i can see penn webb maybe hooking up with jane forbes. I also think crashes friend mike might become jelous of crash because he scores all the touchdowns in the football games, and everyone pays more attention to crash and not mike cause he is just a linmen. I also think crash and mike are going to regret bullieing penn because they might find out he is a good kid and he might become their friend.
ReplyDeleteJessica I can see what you ar saying too. I mean I put orginally that they might win and flip since in alot of books and movies the good guy or the loser will always win and or the loser in the school will always end up being liked by everyone. Although I can understand your idea since it is true that they are losers and the only reason they might possibly have a chance of winning is because DuShawn is their President. So if I had to write two different ways on how I see this book ending your idea would be similar.
ReplyDeleteCourtney, Its really cool to hear that there will be almost a revealence of personalities at the end of your book. I have a similar feeling towards my characters at the end of "Make Lemonade". its also sort of said to hear that the characters in your book are being everything BUT themselves.
ReplyDeleteI think that at the end of Mistfits the kids will branch out and become friends with the other kids in the school. I also think that Bobby will end up dating Kelsey Scoggins.And when they get out of school they will all be normal people and live a happy life.
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ReplyDeleteI strongly disagree.First of all popular kids dont always win....most of the time YES! But not always.Also just because there the only black kids in the entire 7th grade means nothing.....because just because your diffrent gives you more of a challange to "popular".....mabye standing out is a good thing!
Heather;
ReplyDeleteI think the same thing will happen in the end. I think they will all end up being the most popular kids in the school and they will all be cool.
I think that Ponyboy and Johnny would eventually get caught because nobody can commit a murder and get away with it. I also think that the war between the Greasers and Socs will end since Bob their big leader was killed and Jonny and Ponyboy will be in jail. Darry and the gang would try to go beak Johnny and Ponyboy out of prison, then the novel would go into a second story about the busting out of jail. I can't wait to find out the climax of my book.
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ReplyDeletei agree with Alicia also. But I think that LaVaghn will keep babysitting though.......
I agree Joe. Most people eventually get caught for murder, whether it be in twenty days or twenty years. Also i wouldn't want to live in a church for my entire life.
ReplyDeleteIn my book, Make Lemonade, I think things will end all cookie cutter and happy; like everybook usually does. Currently Jolly is struggling to support her two toodlers, so I believe that Jolly will find a stabble job, and get a better home. Also, I think that Jollys boss will be put in jail. Lavaughn is trying to get money for college and its not working it out because Jolly isn't paying her for babysitting, so I tihnk that Lavaughn will first help Jolly with babysitting, but find another better job, and then she will graduate highschool and then go to college to be sucsessful.
ReplyDeleteIn my book, The Outsiders, I predict that in the end of the book, Johnny will end up killing himself somehow. I think this because he feels horrible about killing a Socy. If I were him, I could not live with the gilt. I also think that Dally will die because he and Johnny were really good friends and if Johnny kills himself, Dally will too.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Joe. Even if somebody kills someone and runs away, eventually they will be found. Criminals can be stupid sometimes. For example, Johnny and Ponyboy left the fountain without trying to cover anything up. The police could easily find their shoeprints on the concrete and track them down.
ReplyDeleteI think in my book "The Outsiders" the ending will be an all out-war between the Socs and the Greasers, and Johnny won't turn himself in like he said to Dally at Dairy Queen. Also I think that Cherry and Marcia might have to kill one of there fellow Socs in self-defense to safe there own lives like Johnny hade to for Ponyboy.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Joe. Even if someone tries to cover up a muder scene, they will get caught. For example, Johnny and Ponyboy just left the fountain where they murdered the Socy without covering anything up. The police could easily find their shoeprints on the concrete and track them down.
ReplyDeleteIn my book Fever 1793, I think that the ending is going to be that Matilda finds her mom and Eliza.Then they all go back to the coffee house and the yellow fever slow dies down.
ReplyDeleteIf I were to look into a crystal ball it would be a very interesting ending for my book "The Outsiders" by S.E. Hinton. I predict that at the end of the book the two gangs, Socs and Greasers will have a huge fight and a lot of people will die. I think in the end the Greasers will win the fight and will be the new "cool guys on the block." I beleive this because they have been winning the fights lately and will eventually kill them all.
ReplyDeleteMy book, "Make Lemonade" is very hard for me to predict. I know for sure this book will end happily but im not sure in which way. Will Jolly ever be somewhat wealthy? Or go back to living on the streets like she used to? I always wonder if her kids will have a good education and be succesfull, like Lavaughn is trying to do. I wonder if Lavaughn will every recieve all the money Jolly owes to her. This story has lots of mixed feelings, I think this is because every character is very different from one another. Thats why i can't really see the "future" into this book besides a happy ending. There is many open ended questions in this book that seem to never have an answer. For the most part, im sure Jolly will find a well paid job and give more money then usual to Lavaughn; like she should be doing now. Jeremy and Jilly, Jolly's children, hopefully grow up with a very well education and pass high school. Unlike their mother. Im really hoping Jolly takes Lavaughn's idea and moves out of their apartment and finds a new clean hope for the three opf them; Jolly needs a well life. Not like the messed up one she is living now.
ReplyDeleteIn my book Money Hungry, I predict that Raspberry's mom will mary the rich doctor because of his money. Raspberry and her mom live in the ghetto and thry are one of the poor people in the story. Also, I predict that Raspberry and Sato will go out with each other, reguardless of how Sato acts when his friends arent around. Finally I predict that Raspberry will loose her obsetion with money because onnce her mom marries the rich doctor, she will have a good supply of it.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Isha and Alicia, because most good paying jobs require a college degree. So the characters in your book should probably go back to school.
ReplyDeleteat the end of my story i see Johnny and Ponyboy going back home and getting caught but they get let go cause it was self defense. I think that ether Ponyboy or Johnny will get killed for killing the soc.I also believe that at the vary end of the story all the fighting will come to a stop and all the gangs will have peace with one another. I agree with you Ryan the outsiders is very unpedictable. It will make you think one thing but says what you werent thinkink.
ReplyDeleteIn my book make lemonade the main character jolly is struggling with two kids and she is 17 years old. she hierd LaVaghn to babysit her kids while she went to work. Jolly came home one day and told LaVaghn that she is fired from her job because he boss tried to "feel her" and she stapped him with a pensil so he fired her. she is now looking for a job so that she can pay for her kids and not have them suffer just like she is doing. this book is difficult to predict because it has random event that you dont even see comming. But i think that in the end jolly will find a job or go back to school so she can get a good education to get a good job.
ReplyDeleteMrs. Abby Chow, I most deffiently agree with you. This story has a very cookie cutting problem. The characters are very unalike to one another. I truely think the story will end well just as you said, and everyone will be happy like very other sad begining book. "Make Lemonade" is the type of story to do so and make you wonder what is going to happen? and how are they going to fix the problems that are accuring? You and I are on them same page with "Make Lemonade".
ReplyDeleteWow Kyle! Thats a harsh way to put an ending that you think will happen (eventually the Greasers will kill all the Socs). But thats what I think might happen to, I said that Cherry and Marcia will join the Greasers side and might have to kill Randy or another Soc in self-defense to save themselves.
ReplyDeleteWhat do I predict in my magic crystal for The Outsiders? I see nothing but tragedy. Darrel will mess with the wrong people in a desperate bid to find Ponyboy, Two-Bit and Dallas might end up in the morgue after taking part in the vacant brawl, and Johnny is so unstable, he seems like he's going to be just another statistic in the long line of suicides.
ReplyDeleteIn no way do I believe this story can turn this coal into diamond as the Socs will never live the murder down. The Socs vs. Greaser struggle will boil down to even more deaths. I'll be shocked if this prediction wouldn't come true.
The only, only event that would be a ray of sunshine would be Ponyboy dating Cherry but we all know how Romeo and Juliet ended (I hope).
I am reading the book Make Lemonade, by Virginia Euwer Wolff. If I could use a crystal ball and see the ending of the story, I think I would be very pleased. I think that many conflicts would be solved. For example this biggest conflict I see forming at this point in the story is a conflict with LaVaughn and her mom. LaVaughn is currently baby-sitting for a 17 year old single mother. All is going good at first until the 17 year old mom, Jolly, gets fired from her job and can not pay LaVaughn. I think all this is going to make a conflict between LaVaughn and her mom because her mom just wants best for her daughter. This includes saving money to go to college. If LaVaughn keeps baby-sitting for Jolly and not getting paid the college fund is not going to increase. Another conflict that I think is going to be solved is that Jolly will finish taking her classes, and get a better job. So I am very excited to finish reading the book, and see how the conflicts will turn out.
ReplyDeleteIn my book "Make Lemonade", I think that what lies ahead for LaVaughn is good. I belive that because she is so determined to go to college, sooner or later, she will be there. When LaVaughn sets her heart on something, she tries until she gets it. She really wants to get out of the nasty, crime filled place she has lived in her whole life. Also she really wants to feel safe, it's not like she says it through out the book, but you can kind of feel it. If I was her I would feel the same way.
ReplyDeleteI think money hungry will end was rasberry mom going out with mr. mitthell. And rasberry will make ENOUGH MONEY FOR HER MOM TO BUY A NICE HOUSE AND WOULD NOT BE LIVING IN A VAN. AND THEY WOULD HELP PEOPLE THAT ARE HOMELESS
ReplyDeleteShelby I most definitly agree with you. If I were to have the crystal ball I would love to figure out what goes on later in the story because sometime my book can leave you hanging and sometimes its a total disaster. I think that if were to have the crystal ball I would wish that I could find out with what Mtisha and Slams future would be and how he does and if he is successful throughout high school and what the future job he holds is.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jerome.I do think that her mom is going to mary him.Then they will live happy ever after together.Never have to think about are they ever going to live on the side of the road.Then they will tell each other what is going on in there life.
ReplyDeleteIn my book "The Outsiders" i think that there will be a big gang fight and alot of people will die and Darry and Ponyboy will become closer to each other. Also maybe Johnny or Soda will get realy hurt or even die. I think that the greasers will win the gang fight and get rid of the socs for good.
ReplyDeleteI AGREE WITH MADDIAN.M BECAUSE MOST JOBS YOU NEED TO FINSH HIGH SCHOOL OR SOME MET NEED A COLLAGE DEGREE
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Kyle, that there will be a big brawl and alot of people will die. But i also think some of the main characters will be killed.
ReplyDeletei think money hungry will end with shocking ends.For exmaple i think that Raseberry will stop hustling and find happiness. she will become a better person.for instance she will probably start acting like a young lady.she find better way to slove problem,like insteading of using her fist.I think her mother will leave Zora father and be more indepedent .Ja'nae will stop crushing on Ming and focus on her self more.Overall i think the story will have the happy and sad endings
ReplyDeleteIf i had a crystal ball that could tell me what would happen at the end of my story that's SLAM,i would like to see Greg the main character having faith to be able to ask Ice how he got everything he has now and if he has anything doing with drugs.The outcome of the conflict maybe Greg being able to understand why everyone wants him to learn and they are not against him about playing basketball,and he must understand that the coach doesn't dislike him but he wants him to be able to cooperate with the others.I don't really have an idea what will happen but i think Ice will end up in jail and Mtisha and Greg will end up together.I think at the end everyone will leave happily ever after and Ice will learn his lesson.I don't really know the book you are reading Anwar,but i think it somehow relates to the story i'm reading about a guy and a girl who are always quarelling but they like each other and i would like to know the title of your book.
ReplyDeleteIn the future I think the main character in my book, Slam, would probbaly be playing basket ball and maybe in the NBA. I'm not sure that Slam will get a collage dagree but he might get a schollorship for basket ball. If slam doesent get into collage his mom will probably try to still finance his education some how, she values education alot, actually she thinks school is so important that if his grades fall more he probabbly won't be able to play basket ball.
ReplyDeleteIn the book the misfits i think the endeing is going to go like this. Joe aqnd collin aqre going to go out and addie the one who likes Collin is gonig to get over the fact that Collin likes Joe. But who knows my crystal ball could be wrong about what I said.
ReplyDeleteIf I had a crystal ball to see the end of Hunger Games, I think the ending would have a terribly sad ending. In the Games, someone has to die and i suspect it to be either the main character, Katniss, or one of her enemies will die. Katniss may start trying to stay alive until the last three competiters are alive. Then Katniss will find one and kill them but the last enemy of hers will come out of nowhere and maybe stab her in the back. Even worse, her friend Peeta. Dun dun da! This book has been pretty suspenseful so far...
ReplyDeleteIn my book Money Hungry i think the ending would be with Raspberry and her mom buying the house that Raspberrys mom was looking at. I also think that they will never end up in a broke down truck like the one they lived in before. I also think that she will also sell iteams that wont make people sick and she will make a lot of money for it.
ReplyDeleteIn my book "The Misfits" I think that the misfits are going to try to make a compromise with the popular crowd. I dont actually think that they will become friends after the elections I just think that they will discover that they do have similarites between each other and they dont have to be enemies towards each other!
ReplyDeleteI think my book holes will end with Stanley and Zero running away from camp green lake and finding the mountain he thinks is gods thumb, and the Warden will come after them and try to kill them.
ReplyDeletei found sweatnest witch at the time i did not know whet it ment and i have never herd sombody use it.
ReplyDeleteIf i could see through the future i think that Raspberry when she's an adult she would be rich because she always like an scavenger when come to money she wont wast not one penny.Also if i could see the future i would think that Ja'nae's granddad would fing out that she stole 200 dollars from him to buy Ming a new leather jacket. Also if i could see the future i'd think Dr.Mitchell and Ms.Hill will get married and Raspberry will live in a better house.
ReplyDeleteWhat i predict at the end of the story is that the four misfits which are Bobby, Skeezie, Addie, and Joe are going to win thier third party election and that all the kids thast go to their school will not classify them as a certain group anymore such as the misfits.I also think that their conflict with Kevin Henassey will stop because other people will stand up for them. I also think that all the kids that go to their school will all get along no matter what type of race they are or how they act.
ReplyDeleteAt the end of my book I picture the main character, Katniss, winning the Hunger Games. I picture this because Katniss has put so much time and effort into practicing and taking time out to prep herself for the interview to get into the Hunger Games. I see the main events and conflicts in this story turning out to be an advantage to Katniss while shes in the games. I see this because in the story it makes Katniss out to be a strong girl. I really do think Katniss will win these games.
ReplyDeleteIf i had a crystal ball that let me see in the future i think that the main character Rassbery would grow up to be a pro business women and become very rich. Also i think that her and Sato would get together. This is because in books, most of the time, the characters who fight the most ussually end up getting together. And I think that Rassberrys mother Dr.Mittchel will get together.
ReplyDeleteI think that Jenna G's idea about her ending is a bit gory but my character will probably have to kill someone and win the Game. But she also may just get killed herself or take her own life because she could have killed her friend out of blind fury.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you mickey if i had a crystal ball
ReplyDeletei would think that she will become rich also because i read this book before.
I disagree with thrik because I dont think that Raspberry's mom will get married to Ja'naes' dad because she wouldnt by a house move in then move out. I wouldn't sence there already dont have a lot of money. Thats just money spent and wasted.
ReplyDeleteIn my book "The Misfits" I think the group pf friends will win the election because they stood up for themself with showing that they're just like everyone else. Even though they are the type of kids who get teased, some students still think they're normal and they'll influence others to vote for the "Misfits" as well.
ReplyDeleteIn my book "Fever 1793", I picture the main character, Matilda, being about eighty-five, retelling the entire ordeal to her curious granddaughter. I also think that she will be the only one to have survived the fever, and that her grandfather and mother have fallen victim to the fever.
ReplyDeleteSo since I have a crystal ball the ending of my book The Misfits would go like this...
ReplyDeleteFor the whole group they will win the elections for the school and become more popular then they even want to be.
For Bobby I think he will end up with the quiet girl Kelsey.
For Addie she will end up staying with Colin even thought they dont go out yet.
For Joe he will find a gay guy just like him so they could be happy together.
For Skeezie he will find a girl and will fall in love even though he never said he would.
If i had a crystal ball that aloud me to see the ending of my book "Fever" i think it would be really tragic because in the book so far there has been alot of death and sadness over friends and family like the mane characters mom and grandad both became ill .
ReplyDeletein my book the outsiders, i think the ending of my book will be that the greasers and the socs will all get along and after the rumble they will have no more fights.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Madison, that there will be a happy ending, at least for Matilda, anyway. I doubt that all three of them will just survive and live the rest of their lives merrily. Matilda's going to be remembering this fever for the remainder of her life, and I doubt it'll be in a good way.
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ReplyDeletethough i have not read your book your characters sound like they would have a perfict ending and enjoy it because they get a speacial someone to be with
If I had a cystal ball I would see how my book would end. I really want to see how my book will end cause it started to get good.
ReplyDeleteIn the book "Misfits" I think that Kelsey and Bobby will get together. I think that they wont win the elections but they will get there point across. I they really will get there point across because the one girl Brittany will win it and people will see that Addie was right. Most of all Bobbys will get across because everyone has been called a name. Deep down they know it hurts. Even though its a sometime is a joke. But I think they will learn to except Joe a little more to.
ReplyDeleteWith what has happened so far in my book I think first of all Alex and Mary Lou are going to keep going out for a very long time and with how Beth Ann's exboyfriend is acting tored her I think that she will just have to get over him and move on not to be mean or anything just saying the truth.Ok so lets now talk about the loveily [not] Maggie and her weird boyfreind whos name I still cant rememder.NOW for really intoresting part the one and only Carl Ray [wow just wow]who had just reseved alot of money from an anominise person well I think that he will go to collage and get a good job .Also I think he will final find out who on earth would give him that much money [im sorry but thats insane wow].Mom and dad arent really that interesting and the sibling arent either so sorry thats just my idea so ya bye.
ReplyDeleteAnwar, I agree with you for the book "Crash". Penn probably will end up hooking up with Jane because they spend a lot of time together and it seems like she likes him. Mike and Crash seem to be fighting more and I think that this may lead to a big fight between them that could ruin their friendship.
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ReplyDeletei disagree because LaVghns grades keep dropping so i belive she will fail and not finish collage.
i think tha slam witch is my main carecter at the end of the story well be with mtisha and back in carver and stell be cool with ice.
ReplyDeleteIn "Fever 1793" i think the book will end with Mattie and her mom reuniting at the coffee shop. i think that mattie will follow her dreams of running the coffee shop and become rich and move to France.
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